The Ending is Paramount

(Subaru and Rem - Wedding by KheilaHirai of DeviantArt)

As discussed before, some hentai readers place great importance on the ending of their favorite manga. They get at least somewhat involved with the characters and world, and want everyone involved to be happy. There's nothing wrong with this. These people want to feel both physically and emotionally satisfied at the end of it. They want to get a really cathartic release at the end. Below are some h-manga that have left readers wanting. The list is in no particular order.

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5. Oyako Slave (Mother & Daughter Slave) by Nishikawa Kou

Here we have an interesting story of a home tutor flanked by a hot daughter and mother pair. It begins with the hot mother berating the tutor for her daughter's grades. He doesn't mind it though, he's close up with the mother. He starts to hear a strange rumbling, and discovers the mother's sex toy. He uses this as leverage to get in bed with her, flipping her switch and making her his woman. A day or so later, the daughter finds her tutor, and indeed boyfriend, on the couch with her mother. She reacts as expected and wants in on the action. After a day of sex, the tutor hears the husband pull up, but the women declare that he is their husband.

So, we have a happy ending, right? I think not. Why is no one running off to a room to hide? They're just staying in the living room, naked with a guy's wife and daughter between some other guy's legs. This will not end well at all. Why did they even stay in the living room if they knew they were going to have sex all day? It's not even that comfortable on a couch. Take your sex marathon the daughter's room.

4. Insei Iro Iro by Ishikei

This is a truly good h-manga, and it comes highly recommended. A brother goes to wake up his really busty sister in the morning. Seeing how busty she is, he proceeds to try to get off with her. She wakes up, and just as she is about to get busy with him, they are interrupted and forced to go to school. That night, he sneaks into her room, and they make love, beginning a relationship. The sister seems to have some trust issues, but they are more or less in a committed relationship, with the brother convincing his sister to try new sex acts. The final chapter shows the brother having a sleep walking issue. He walks right into his busty single mother's room and has sex with her, confirming the mother's suspicions that her son and daughter are in a relationship. She doesn't mind this one bit.

While this story does have a happy ending, it introduces an entirely new element with numerous possibilities and doesn't act on them. The hot mother, a true MILF, is introduced like that and it just ends. A more ideal ending is a three-way, brother, sister, and mother. The sister could be convinced, she has been before, and the mother doesn't mind her children in such a relationship.

3. Hole Family by Oshii Rei

A step-mother tries to convince her husband to kick her step-son out of the house, forcing him to get a job and place to live on his own. The son is none to keen on this idea, believing his step-mother hates him. He has long since begun a sexual relationship with her daughter, and is trying to leave a "parting gift" inside her daughter. He constructed a series of glory holes in their shared wall so he can have sex with his step-sister whenever they want without drawing attention.

The step-mother accidentally discovers these openings and her fears are confirmed: her step-son and daughter are indeed having sex, another reason she wanted him out. However, her new husband doesn't satisfy her much, so she is drawn to his son and they proceed to have sex. Her daughter catches them in the act and joins in. His father comes home and also discovers them, but is more or less hiding his anguish and walks out, with the son declaring he would break up the family.

I have no sympathy for this guy. His father was on his side the whole time. Sure, make your step-mother and sister your women, it's been done before, but why rub it in the poor guy's face? Act in privacy, keep the women happy, and find a way to really make them yours.

2. Love Flag Girls!! by Takahashi Itsumi

This one isn't hentai in the strictest sense of the word. Yes, there is nudity and sex, but it's moreso ecchi than anything. A princess grows concerned for her mother, the queen, as the queen has been crying non-stop. Apparently a pirate has stolen a valuable family heirloom: a silver cross necklace. The princess runs away to take back the cross, disguising herself as a commoner. She gains employment on the ship, and discovers the captain is the daughter of the pirate who stole the cross from the queen. The captain is a cheerful and flirtatious girl, seducing not only the princess, but many of the crew. Eventually, the princess and captain fall in love.

After surviving an assault by the queen's navy, the princess runs back to the castle to convince her mother to call off the attacks. Clearly mad, the queen has the princess imprisoned. The captain rescues her and takes her back to the ship. During another attack, the captain's mother appears with the cross. It is revealed that she and the queen were lovers when they were younger, but the pirate left her, deciding it would be better for her. Their romance is rekindled and the cross is passed onto their daughters, who proceed to sell it and buy an island to live happily ever after.

Now you're really wondering why this manga is on here. It was a true happily ever after story. However, not everyone got their happy ending. The quartermaster idolized the captain's mother. She was infatuated with the legendary pirate. Everyone feels sorry for her. They know she loves the captain, they know her room is decorated as such, and think it's sad. There should have been some closure to that, like the captain and queen inviting her in for a threesome, or finding her own girlfriend.

1. Hustle! Danchizuma by Hidemaru ★

A hopeless man is laid off and left penniless and homeless. A kindly wife and mother takes him in while her husband is away. They proceed to make love quite often. When her husband is due to return, the man is kicked out and takes up residence with another lonely married women, and the cycle continues anew. He eventually finds his way to a single lady CEO who gives him a job and has orgies with hot rich women. She senses his unhappiness, so proceeds to fire and break up with him. He gets an apartment in the same building as the first married women he slept with.

A fine ending, but it could be better. The man did not have to choose. In fact, he could have mentioned the married women he missed to his new hot rich girlfriend, and very likely, she would have invited them over for one of their orgies. He could have had it all and have been set for life: a great job, hot rich girlfriend, and numerous lovers.

What did you think of these 5 manga that should have ended differently? Do you agree or disagree with these conclusions? Do you know of any other manga that could have done their endings differently? Tell us in the comments below!